What You Want

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  1. Chunkmonk
    November 5, 2017 at 10:21 pm

    Story got me hooked , early, to wanting and waiting to find the climax.!

  2. Sunstar
    November 29, 2017 at 1:49 pm

    I was so sad when part 1 was over… Ready for part 2..
    Thank you!!

  3. Melody
    December 27, 2017 at 10:21 am

    Not what I was expecting at all but was a great read!! Loved it.

  4. Kent
    December 28, 2017 at 8:52 am

    I enjoyed the read very much. I will be sure to check out more of your work.

  5. Marco
    January 3, 2018 at 7:43 am

    Very Talented and Erotic.

    Great Twist of plot

  6. Daisy
    January 3, 2018 at 3:29 pm

    Please continue!

  7. Her
    January 12, 2018 at 5:11 pm

    I liked it

  8. BuckRiver
    January 21, 2018 at 3:10 am

    Short and quickly to the point. Have had that kind of experience so know it could have been in real life. Wonder about her.

  9. Edward Brittania
    January 28, 2018 at 8:48 am

    This was so good. It’s something I’ve never had the courage to do.

  10. J.M.
    January 29, 2018 at 4:48 am

    My wife & I just frigged ourselves raw after reading this offering. It was great for role playing adventure.

  11. Chantyse
    February 1, 2018 at 12:19 am

    , I loved it, has a very perplexed suspense that you usually don’t find in a erotic story. Thank you. i enjoyed it very much

  12. A.S.
    February 15, 2018 at 1:36 am

    Your writing is amazing. It nust sucks me in and no matyer what, i want to read more!

  13. K
    March 27, 2018 at 5:10 am

    I read the first half and had to come back to it again later. Just finished the second half, fun read!

  14. Pauline Bernadeth
    April 26, 2018 at 2:27 pm

    Woah~ this is epic. Well written. This is the first fiction that I have read here, and I’ll be surely to read all your other stories. I hope this will inspire me to also write my own erotic fiction in the future.

  15. Elizabeth Horton
    June 2, 2018 at 7:16 am

    That was intense

  16. Rox
    June 25, 2018 at 6:10 pm

    I’m so sucked in! I didn’t want it to end. I’ll be back for more!!

  17. Odd Phat Asss
    July 9, 2018 at 11:52 pm

    Oh wow!!! Interesting!!!!!! Loved it

  18. Shakti
    August 3, 2018 at 10:05 pm

    Part 2 please…

  19. Supertrooper
    September 3, 2018 at 8:39 pm

    These type of encounters always leave me feeling empty inside, and over time, it takes more to move you. It’s like a drug. The first time it’s amazing, but then you need more to get off or feel anything. Lust never leads to long-term happiness. It was painful to read how selfish the woman in this story was and sad to know she will never find true happiness.

  20. Syrus
    September 18, 2018 at 8:51 am

    This really displayed and laid out emotions we all are conflicted with. Our inner demons urge us onward when our wavering morals try to protect us. Well written and presented. Thanks!

  21. Gen
    September 18, 2018 at 8:23 pm

    First read of your writing, you’re very talented. Keen to read more, keep up the great work!

  22. Amygreen
    December 14, 2018 at 5:25 am

    wow… it’s beautiful! Great story! Love your writing!

  23. Kay
    December 22, 2018 at 8:55 am

    This is the first story of yours that I have read, and I love how it is from a man’s perspective. I also really like how her emotions are pertrayed in the beginning as every woman at some point seems “crazy” due to her emotions.

  24. LovelyLady
    January 13, 2019 at 10:45 am

    This was so well written. This was the first of your work that I have read. Definitely will be reading more.

  25. wild flower
    January 26, 2019 at 1:20 am

    First time here and I’m glad to have read this story. Does he find her ?

    • February 1, 2019 at 2:51 pm

      How would you like the story to end?

      That’s the way it ends.

  26. Alex
    January 29, 2019 at 8:18 am

    This was absolutely amazing. It definitely turned me on. You described everything so well and with just a right amount of detail. Thank you for writing it!

  27. Chris
    February 7, 2019 at 11:41 am

    Great story

  28. Stacy
    February 10, 2019 at 8:16 am

    Your writing is amazing! You described everything so well, and it really did the trick.

  29. Helen
    March 13, 2019 at 3:19 pm

    I really like the anger you expressed through the male character, and the unwanted but needed savagery of the thought process that went through his head right before he caved in.

  30. Ri
    April 10, 2019 at 6:03 am

    The story was pretty good and short. Great read!

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